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sitting in the waining evening
the thick black ink
eased onto my open skin
blotting out the blood and bruises.
Staring at it there staining my hand
i thought i might disolve into a line or two
of words. Something deep like an ocean
something rivaling emotion.
the ink spread like a black hill
rising on my skin.

I wish i could dissolve into a word. In words
love is real
hate can kill
people can push and pull and pinch
and we need never move.
In a poem you and i can exist.
while outside it is the rain
wipes my footprints from outside your door.
:iconkhrishna:
my pen exploded.
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:iconxpetalsfallenx:
I probably haven't given this poem the time that it deserves, but I must say that I certainly enjoy the lines "...Something deep like an ocean/ something rivaling emotion." Yes indeed...
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:iconkhrishna:
that's good enough for me.=)

you're comment. :p
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:iconmary--jane:
the ending
made me feel like theres a storm outside
when theres a bright sun shining down on people walking in the street..
probably sweating to death.

good ending.
good writing.
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:iconundead85:
you know
this is
very very very good

i hate myself for not having read it before
but now i did
and now i can tell
how much i like it

you blow me away
-my poet friend-
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:iconkhrishna:
poets are people who have to write in order to experience something.
they never live in the moment.
reserecting everything with words.

so i'm sort of like a necromancer, yes. 8-)

:bow:
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:iconihrie:
sweet sweet little martyr... you out do yourself again... :+fav:
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:iconphreakie-loser:
wow wow wow wow wow wow

WOOOOOOOOOOO!

[are you back?]

[i miss you]

WOOOOOOOT!!

anyways i love this poem

its pretty [just like you]

:cake:
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:iconkhrishna:
=) why thank you my darling.

im glad my writing could produce a written orgasm so.
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:iconphreakie-loser:
:D what can i say, you are amazing

WHERE THE HELL HAVE YOU BEEN? [loud voice]

i miss you :tears:
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:iconmycheaptrick:
Mmmmmmmmmmmgod.

:heart:
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