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Under the coma of this sky I am fraught with clouds
Beneath the needlework of this ground
I am exhausted by the stitch of groaning roots
Between the echo of every footfall I compose passion
With notes that crawl like black ants across the skin.

Not the weed that sneaks like a finger through the black dust
Not the pedals closed like a fist around their colors in the dark
Not the cold in my cracked dirt caked hands

Could stop me from digging this hole
So something around here can be beautiful.
Anonymously pinned under 2 a.m. stars.
The gray dirt rolling off my knees.
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:iconsdayton:
~sdayton Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
seven years later and this still just slays me.
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:iconicantwrite:
Amazing!! Inspirational!!! Time to grab a pen and paper and sit outside. Thanks for the inspiration.
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:iconkhrishna:
i'm sorry this is terrifyingly late

but thank you
so much
for your kind words.

i hope you did grab a pen and run outside,
most of the time that's the only way to come back with something. :)
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:iconicantwrite:
I've done just that on many occasion recently :)
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:iconkhrishna:
that is good.:tea:
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:iconandintodecember:
I know I've already commented on this, but I thought I'd just say that this has become my favourite poem of all time. :)
To put it lightly.
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:iconkhrishna:
to put it lightly i thought i'd just say
that this sort of thing really brightens my day
so


have a teddy. :teddy:


yeah=)
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:iconandintodecember:
This is the kind of poem you could WORSHIP.
The line 'Not the weed that sneaks like a finger through the black dust' just did it for me.
I have to add you to my watch list now.
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:iconkhrishna:
haha. that kind of reaction makes me smile. =)
i think i must go lay down.




:teddy:
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