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It is no kind of life.
drowning out the drone of the alarm clock.

We are lepers in the bathroom,
gouging out rotten eyes,
rubbing off rotten noses,
rinsing out our tasteless mouths with tasteless water.
A whole new day, a whole new you.
Life is chit-chat.

Then we slide into history, coffee drugged.
A faceless brushstroke in an unfinished painting
by an unknown artist

that will end up in the attic,
while we end underground.
:iconkhrishna:
is anything compelling anymore?
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:icontatami:
Thank you for reminding me of my depression.

I LOVE it.


It's like caffeine for the people that know happiness is just a made-up excuse out of the monotony of life and love.
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~Petra- Nov 13, 2004  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you for describing the misery with such accuracy and simplicity. This is certainly a fave.
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:iconkhrishna:
:bow:

always a pleasure really.

=)

thanks again for the fave.
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:icongoofyromantic:
I see where you're goin
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:iconkhrishna:
good. ...

one of us should
otherwise
we may end up on the road
and
in the rain and underneath a rain
bow
down.

and i'm certainly not the navigator
of this particular bicycle.
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:iconcoldpoisonedheart:
absolutely beautiful. i love its aspect of simplicity, it works really well.
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:iconkhrishna:
thanks

it's good to hear that
somepeople can still
find the simple things
mysterious and beautiful.

=)
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:iconnonsensicalentity:
I really love this, I think it beautifully illistartes how meaningless our lives really are, to everyone but us. Maybe that's not waht you meant, but that's just what I got out of it.
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:iconkhrishna:
you got something out of it...
it's always good to hear that.

and there are always different lights one can look at these things under,
you found a pretty one,
and that makes me happy.

thank you.=)
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