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September 1, 2005
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I hear the coughing at four or five in the morning
when i ease through the black crack in the doorway to your room.
your skinny throat grumbling agian like a steeple crashing into your lungs.


Sometimes i feel my hands are sewn behind my back my darling.
Sometimes i see you trembling, glistening with crystals, like a closed fist too
     tight for me to squeeze through.
Sometimes i feel your skin like an empty emberless furnace, cold and hard
     and when i saw an ant creeping up the bone on your shoulder in the dark

to crush it

i pressed my skin to your skin
and i held and i held and i held.
:iconkhrishna:
life is not a product.
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:icongoofyromantic:
Your visions are so vivid and beyond reality, or any common way of perceiving things, it's like reading a fantasty book.
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:iconkhrishna:
fantasy is for blind people. ...poetry is for gods and goats and coke addicts. i love that soul you have.
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:iconmary--jane:
Very simple with a load of emotions attached to it.
Always a pleasure reading your thoughts.
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:iconkhrishna:
i see you like the clearest clouds. ...you can fly.


bring back pictures? i'd like to see things. =)
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:iconmary--jane:
How are you, Mister Khrishna sir?
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:iconkhrishna:
hmm. ...i think i'm about to post a journal enry. ....oh dear. :o where are my minds?

i'm ok. ..no matter what i may say later. =) and i hope you are likewise, all those miles away.
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:iconmary--jane:
A journal entry? :excited:

I have not posted a proper one in a while. But I'm still featuring people because I think it's become my job around here. [link] You were mentioned here but you weren't around. :lonely:
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:iconkhrishna:
:D i read that. you are too kind too mention me. ...:heart:

i'll be around more these days. l'll try.
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:iconmary--jane:
Good.
We need you around. Or maybe it's just me.
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:iconzerothirtythree:
so strange and pretty, as always.
this bit of writing is unusually fragile for you, it seems
and i like it that way.

you always come up with some wonderful imagery too (the steeple part especially.)

prettty pretty.
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