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the unfinished gentleman. by ~Khrishna:iconKhrishna:



Words have a weight all their own.
Pushing the stones around with my tongue
i excavate speach, uncovering artifacts.
i found everything within an alabaster jar.
the dried wine the scrap of linen, the halting
compliment.
I seek the eternal engine
not just the combustion of the heart.
Looking forward to midnight
and to dusk at the crossroads writing
names with a stick in the dust an infinity
of names in the dust and nothing lifts my blood
but moving from word to word to word.
©2006-2009 ~Khrishna
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more than just
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there is a spoon on my desk

it's been here for a few weeks now

i think it may have a bit of yogurt stuck to it.

why do i insist on not putting it in the sink.



god i hate being difficult.


=) laura i misss sss s s ss ss sss;laura

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"All art is quite useless."
-Oscar Wilde
although i have so sense of poetry, never really seem to understand it and should be shot for the shocking marks i get for it at school, i still maintain that you write the best poetry.... in my books (which arent very thick i must warn you)
...it completely confuses me and yet i cant stop reading it..enough rambling...very nicely done :)
of all the things people should be shot for
not caring for poetry is one

not understanding
is not. because the one is for fools
and the other is for everyone.

--
"All art is quite useless."
-Oscar Wilde
I really like it.. AS USUAL.

sjeez can't you write some crap sometime like the rest of us?

:p

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If I could start again, a million miles away. /
made me think of jesus for some reason, a lovely read and adventure in words... as usual
jesus eh?
well if you insist
but by all means dont tell anyone! ;p

i have a reputation. :)

nice to see you back too.

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"All art is quite useless."
-Oscar Wilde
i'll try harder i
apologize
for not sucking.

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"All art is quite useless."
-Oscar Wilde
About writers? Lovely. Your poetry has, what might be called, a romantic quality because it could be the most despaired, gritty, vile subject in the world...

but it's eretheal.

And now that I just said a word that I'm not sure I spelled correctly, allow me to point out "speach", is "speech" unless you were going through some witty word play that flew over my head.

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