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under a tree of cherries. by ~Khrishna:iconKhrishna:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Experimental > Surrealism


Holding you on a september night
 the sweet dead smell of everything unwinds.
 heavy cherries drip from their branches
breathing branches bow under the sky

The sky bends over everything like a holy dome.
and then all the space between the stars fills up with light.
                        and the stars too swollen to sing
                                                                       Hum down to me.
©2007-2010 ~Khrishna
:iconkhrishna:

Author's Comments

i should have never even let go. :)

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:iconangie1969:
~angie1969 Oct 17, 2007, 11:54:07 AM
how do u read it? i mean how exactly do u read it? it's very interesting! :rose:

--
I am my past, my present and my future wrapped in skin :rose:
:icondeemer:
~Deemer Oct 18, 2007, 5:17:04 AM
Ooh.

Very powerful, very atmospheric, almost gloomy.. But in the same way it's very tender to me. Surreal, seemingly threatening, but it's not all it seems.


Get to writing more. And get to publishing will you.

I MEAN IT.

--
If I could start again, a million miles away. /
:icondismalhush:
~dismalhush Oct 18, 2007, 6:51:57 AM
Each time I read one of your poems, I distinguish this intangible quality that continuously enthralls me. You have a completely unique style and your writings are always so sincere, with a tinge of the darkness of human emotion and life mixed in. In this poem, I love how you focus on the attributes of nature instead of what it is like to hold this other person. It's beautiful, dreamy, and just a pleasure to read. :)

--
I see you wrapping the continents
Into a sushi roll
And it's making me hungry
:iconkhrishna:
~Khrishna Oct 18, 2007, 7:40:44 AM
i am most tender and gloomy person,
at your service.






i'll publish something sometime.
don't worry. :)

<3

--
"All art is quite useless."
-Oscar Wilde
:iconkhrishna:
~Khrishna Oct 18, 2007, 7:44:01 AM
i could not ask more
from anything that i write.

thank you. =)

--
"All art is quite useless."
-Oscar Wilde
:iconkhrishna:
~Khrishna Oct 18, 2007, 7:45:24 AM
i read it how you would read it.

and yes, it is very interesting. =)

--
"All art is quite useless."
-Oscar Wilde
:iconkhrishna:
~Khrishna Oct 18, 2007, 8:23:55 AM
ps.

"a"

:D

--
"All art is quite useless."
-Oscar Wilde
:iconjack22:
~jack22 Oct 23, 2007, 1:59:09 PM
Lovely work, darling. I've missed your words.
:iconkhrishna:
~Khrishna Oct 23, 2007, 3:30:14 PM
thanks lady. :bows:

hopefully one of these days i'll get back to posting enough
so that you don't have to say that every time you read one of my poems.
i'm most productive during the fall so who knows.

i really hope you've been taking care of yourself.

:tea: cheers.

--
"All art is quite useless."
-Oscar Wilde
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